All Comments on 'A Day on the Water'

More please!

Please continue!!!!!!

More please!

What do you mean “if I’d like to read the next part”? I need to read the next part. I think I am falling in love with Mia!

loved it want to read more

That was fun and exciting. I definitely want to read the next part!

Can't wait for the next one!

I hope that there will be a chapter two coming soon.

Mia and her daddy Mike plainly have many more adventures ahead!

Very good writing! Looking forward to Mia learning more about men. This is where I always want to be, in daddy’s strong arms!

My cock is standing at attention more PLEASE

Wow, great story. I'd love to keep reading.

Great story. I'd love to read more.

I certainly want more, just like Mia.

5 stars, Thank you! more please : )

Yes!!! Please write part two.

Please!

Please do part 2

Loved it!!!

OMG, please write more. This is so hot!!

I absolutely love the innocence of this story, please write the next chapters soon, 5*

great story, hope there are more to come

Normally, I by-pass stories beyond 3.5k words. After reading part 2, I came back to part one. Well worth the return.

A couple of ill-placed words, or word tense useage. Not sufficient to detract from this beautiful start to what I hope is a multi chaptered series. As others have mentionned, innocence establishes and carries through rather compelling readers to continue.

Love to hear more.

very good. please continue this story. Mia and Mike were just getting started.

Oh Baby Girl, I would love to be your Daddy!

Hell yes I want to read the next part.

Very good story. I haven’t read pt2 yet but I’m all in. I like your writing and the storyline is descriptive, well paced and believable—in Lit world and particularly to me believability is more about a story not interrupting my fantasy focus with bad grammar, preposterous situations and or characters, but most of all with numb-headed dumb. Your story is tender and romantic. Let’s see where you take it. L O

OMG. Loved the story from start to finish! Very well developed. I could feel the sexual tension the moment Mia was first eyed by Mike, to her enjoyment of dressing in her swimwear under her clothes, to sunbathing on the boat and getting ogled by Mike the whole time! Loved the playful swimming parts, and the swimwear malfunctions and changes of clothing, and the very well written and developed sexy, exhibitionist blowjob! Almost felt like I was there, living it! Beautiful story; Can't wait to read the next chapter ;)