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squareybobsquareybob12 months ago

Well done, EveryDenial!

You made nearly every man's dream come true, and in a very believable way. What a grand(e) adventure. Sexy, and very sweet as well. Not sure how long a relationship with Ms. Thank you, Next would last, but I'm happy not to have a sequel and just enjoy the 24-hour scenario that you set up here.

Good writing as well. Natural dialog, varied sentence structure, no errors that detracted from your story. My first story of yours. Looking forward to reading more. Thanks for this one.

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Just trying to have fun :) I've been told I write like I'm scripting a play. Hopefully some people will like that style. Not all content is made for everyone! If you don't like something please don't read my work and please don't send hate. Thank you :) https://linktr.ee/e...