All Comments on 'A Deal with Daddy'

I wish it was a lot longer

God I love this story. It feeds my sadistic side. More please. I can't wait!!!

I'm so happy you're back to publishing stories. Gimme more!!!

very good story, but i disappointed , its very short. please add on some sequels... the hero should similar deal with Brotherinlaw to fuck his own sister, dealwith fil to fuck hisMil etc..

Incredible story! I've been a sissy bitch all my life and have fantasized about sucking my daddy's yummy big cock since I was a little boy

i wish my dad would have made me his bitch like that but he was not around when mom and i made love

Wish my Dad would of fucked me in the ass with his cock also Wish my mom would have let me fuck the pussy that I Came out of Very hot Story made me cum

I wish I could fuck my mother and let my father fuck my ass! Being Daddy's little bitch and giving him pleasure while taking his seed would be so, so good ;)

Great story. I hope you write a sequel.

I personally think it's outstanding, any chance of a fallow-up?! would love to see where it goes.

Got my bbc hard just reading it and thinking I was the father.....mmmm

Not my particular kink, but well-written, and I like that it's not the usual Oedipal bullshit.

i wish i was him to and having mommy and daddy turn me into a ts while doing whatever they want me to in reason.

I'm sorry but i kinda pity the boy. Good story though.

Oh how I want to be that boy ;) yummm ;) Daddy sucking my package through panties and making me his bitch. Oh yeah. Great story!

This story was pretty funny.

Good.story...Fucking Hilarious!

You should really make a sequel.

I was disappointed... I was looking for dad to fuck his son while the boy was fucking mom.

I want to read more about this familt, and the father's control.

if you were my mom and dad and let me fuck mom i to would dress as a sissy girl for you and mom mom could teach me how to please you and show me how girl do thing for there manif mom told me that i will being wearing girl clothes for now on and that i was daddy play toy and do what dad wanted i would said yes mom mom could show me how to suck and fuck like a girl and dress me in dress bra nigtie panties

well your story sure made it obvious that i have a double standard.. i enjoy female with female,but not male on male .. but then that is MY CHOICE.. & each of us can read what we want to .. I chose to read this , DID I HATE IT ? NO IN FACT OVER ALL IT WAS MORE ON THE ENTERTAINING SIDE, BEARING IN MIND THAT THIS STORY IS NOT MY NORMAL READING SUBJECT MATTER .. I DID FIND IT EASY TO READ & EASY TO FOLLOW, ALSO IT WAS WRITTEN IN ENGLISH.., ISNT IT STRANGE THAT THE MOST OF US WHO CANT OR WILL NOT WRITE A STORY NEVER LET ANY-ONE THAT WE BAD-MOUTH OR CRITICIZE KNOW OUR USER NAMES BUT RATHER HIDE BEHIND ANONYMOUS..KEEP WRITING ..

I enjoyed it. Keep the stories coming.