All Comments on 'A Deal with Grandpa - The Beginning'

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ShortieJenShortieJenover 1 year ago

So very hot, now I have to find the sequel.

oldsage_1oldsage_1over 1 year ago

Short, Sweet and hotter than a Labor Day fire cracker! I may have to go back and reread the other one!

Happy Labor Day, Doc!

Cheers

SAGE

sargedog1sargedog1over 1 year ago

Great series, great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Sweet. Thanks. 5.

PyroPyroover 1 year ago

Good story. Well written. It's just... I never got to that point where I could suspend disbelief. It just seemed to fall together far to casually with everyone.

But, that's just me. I like my stories a little more complex.

DevilbobyDevilbobyover 1 year ago

A sweet story, I'm all for training.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very nice story but seems things got a little rushed it went from them talking about him being a sugar daddy to 2 years latter! It was a bit short still gave it 5stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gym52Gym52about 1 year ago

A five star story, that could well have been fleshed out into something considerably longer but still as exciting.

TransguycharlieTransguycharlie11 months ago

Fucking hot. I’m about ready to explode. Can’t wait for the little sister to join

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Did not like it just a mother and daughter being a whore 2 stars

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My stories and characters are fiction. I wish I could have done all this stuff. The reviews from Anonymous, on the first few, nearly drove me away. Fortunately, some seasoned writers stepped up and warned me to take comments like those with a grain of salt. It helped. I read...

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