by velvet hammer
How long until she is hiding "her money"?
How long until she is resentful of him not making more money?
How long until she starts seeing the husband as not up to her standards?
How long until she starts cutting her husband off?
Well written. But, wasn't she in the first chapter a surrogate at the sex clinic, and married? Maybe I'll just have to await Ch. 3. I didn't think it was as well written as Chapter 1.
Very nice writing, and the female lead is charming. As a serious writer, though, you might want to drop the "like I saids" and use "as I said" when appropriate.
It may be a different kind of open marriage, but it's the same kind of fetish story posted by somebody who apparently isn't smart enough to find the Fetish category...
This is better titled, "basic bitch open marriage" or, " cliche' open marriage". Not as catchy, but way more accurate.
Five stars and favorited the story. Ready to hear more from the whore-wife and how she sucks cock and fucks other men for 💵
On the face of it - it's an honorable situation: The woman is in control and the pimp is only a business manager taking his fee. The reality of it is that the woman (in this case a woman who has never had an inter-personal relationship with a man) is witless about what being a woman means to a man - other than being an OBJECT. The story does not delve into the aftermath of this 'money-making' affair and into the psychology of what happens to her when she wants to mature - to have the stability of ONE man and children.
Therefore this story is a 'lure' for a young woman to try such a venture and to get caught and fraught by the aftermath.
Enticingly written!
Just a daylight dreaming femdom fantasy describing how much a "smart" married woman can be. Good luck.
Good story, I like it. Looking forward to Ch 3 when hopefully we'll get back to the present day. Thanks, author.
Thank you for all your kind words - Part 3 has been submitted and Part 4 is in the works ...
Good follow up, put more meat on her character, bet this is a true story to quite a few women,