All Comments on 'A Different Kind of Pilgrimage'

Just fantastic writing so great I was semi when I started but fully hard at the end. Very erotic great job Keith!

WOW! Great story! HOT story! This was beautifully written, and the description of the characters and their rural surroundings was spot on. Would love to hear more about Mark and his evolving life experiences. But for right now, this wonderful story has exceeded the ***** limit. Thanks, MLF

WOW! Great Story as always. Five ***** for sure. Would be interesting to hear What Mark's future holds!!!

Yet nothing great sorry and great setting. You always have a wonderful way of enhancing the sex with a perfect scene setting description. Mark should recognise that just because his sex partner is older doesn't mean the sex will be any less invigorating. A lovely Mexican student who visited my farm to help with his eco-environmental design suddenly caught sight of my hands and long muscly fingers, all but swooned, and dived for my lips. We had a torrid single minded relationship for 12 months before he had to return to Mexico. He was 22 years younger than me which was wryly, and slightly shockingly, noted by my daughter who was a similar age at the time. Age hopefully confers knowledge, and Davide returned home more knowledgeable!

Fantastic story - 5 star's.

Fabulous story, I dream of being taken by a Spanish god like Estevo