All Comments on 'A Dirty Daddy'

Hate it. It's not really a story.

Great little story. I enjoyed it and and wish someone would write about some of my daddy fantasies too.

Hint, hint…

"Hollies" is NOT the possessive form of Holly. Holly's... hope that helps. Also, you have no idea how to write dialogue and punctuate it correctly. Hint: don't put a period at the end of the spoken dialogue, then start a NEW sentence to finish it. You learn that in elementary school. If you're really '54' (fifty-four) as you claim, you either forgot everything you ever learned, or your parents shouldn't have had to pay school tax for an education that lacking. And all those countless mistakes, in a story this short? Maybe go back and take a remedial English class?

Save for typos/spelling, grammatical (only a couple) and the wonton cry of "Please Proof Read,) this would have garnered a 5, as is, only a four ( 4 ).

Really well thought out and timed. Kept us hanging until almost the end . . . Would she become his bed-mat, lover and life partner, or would get take the path chosen?

Great story, keep it up! But you really need to write the second part to "A Daddy's Dream Comes True ", don't leave us hanging.

5 Stars!! Please write more chapters. It's only Friday evening. They have all weekend for fucking babygirl's brains out as well as making sweet, tender love to her.

"Cunt" is the nastiest word to call a woman's vulva. "pussy" is the sexiest. Maybe you're a Brit, and I'm American and maybe that's it, but I don't think so. I'd stay with "pussy".

'Cunt' is fine. Depends on the type of sex you are having. If it's filthy, dirty sex, I'd be saying cunt, bitch, fuck, shit; the filthier the better. I'm Aussie though. We call our mates cunts as a term of endearment. Go the cunt I say.

Great use of cunt love it