All Comments on 'A Dom's Story'

That was wonderful. I would love to read more!

Quite the HOT read!! I'll be back to reread this one for sure!! Keep them cumming!!! Sure hope we don't have to wait as long for the next one!!

As usual, it was incredible Sir....really. I would have liked your subs to please their master a little bit more, and I was thinking that before I even read your line about the zero male orgasms :P But I guess I'll have to wait until the next story. It's nice to see you back, keep writing, you're really, really good at it :) Love ya' "Minke"

loved it , ssc. not just safe sane and consensual, but

sexy , sensual, cumming material, *weg*

This story is the best I have read and how I wish Doms were more like the one in your story...patient, watchful, kind, thinking more on the sub than themselves, controlled, insightful, etc. Please keep writing more stories, Sir.

As usual Sir, WONDERFUL! i thought i had read all of Your material when i happened to reread Your list and found this one...and i believe one more perhaps and i can't wait for the read...i so hope Your very busy on Your next write and things are well for You, Sir. Thanks again, in service and sincere regard...a little texas slave, naynay. P.S. Hurry please Sir...i'm busting to read some new and randy.:)

This was very good story well worth the wait in staying up till 5 am to read it. Master may have my hide but the story was worth it! *grin* also it showed the safe sane and true side of BD and Sm.

With every peice of yours that I read, it gets better and better. Wonderful work, totally worth staying up this late. YOu can be sure I'll continue to read your wonderful work!

Oh thank you Sir so much for such a wonderfuly sensual story of what a true D/s relationship should be like. I enjoyed every hot moment.

this is great! i loved how realistic it was, and how it included natural emotions and dialogue. i could just picture the whole thing. as a sub myself, i could totally relate to sarah. wonderful, hot story! please continue writing more!

wow.. im new to these stories but i loved this oe.. i loved the depth and length of it. it also showed me a side of bdsm that i never knew about.. thank you so much

I'm sad that this is the end of the story. I was really hoping there was more "cumming" but after looking at the dates of the other comments I realize that there won't be more. I would love to have known what happened with David and Mable and what became of Sarah. Excellent story though. 5 stars only because I can't give you 10.

that I was so sad reading the end.

The writing was superb... without any ANY unessassary hardship for the subs. I loved every sentence. Superb 5 Stars.