All Comments on 'A Dragon's Lover Ch. 01'

That was fun, I hope you write more

Great Story. Part 2??

Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for your kind words!

The second part is underway, but might take a few days. Hang in there!

Keep going im liking it but I wish it was a dragon shaped dragon with her not a man shaped dragon.

I second the vote for sex in dragon form!

I think it's going well for how it is written so far. I don't think a giant sized dragon screing a tiny elf would be a good ideal. Because hes already got a dick the size of a horses in human form. To turn into his giant dragon size would probably make his dick the size of his humanoid body if not bigger. That is just too much.

Hi. Not a bad start, but I'd suggest reading more stories by women to see how they think and react to seeing a attractive man/mate/lover. None I've read so far on this have their heroine grab flexible measuring tape to measure the dick of a potentially epic lover. That's a only something a guy would have their character do.

For an excellent example of a female POV when meeting a powerful being, check out "God of Mischief and Lies" by FireFaery - Loki finds something he can't control. Its probably one of THE best written stories on this site.

https://www.literotica.com/s/god-of-mischief-and-lies

Also, check out Endangered, for examples of epic dragon/female sex.

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1582770&page=submissions

Keep writing and best of luck...