All Comments on 'A Dream Come True'

Thanks again.

fantastic story ! ! ! . . :-D

This is a great story and I like it. But You need to contnue the story so we can find out how He got back here to tell it and what happened to him and her.

Maybe a little short. Could have been more erotic. That being said I did enjoy it.

I agree with the previous comment. I like it though.

I feel there seems to be more potential to develop into a full story. As is still it's lovely and sweet.

the story is very good. but is there any chance you can ether finish the story or make a chapter 2 to it. you can prop make a alot of storys.

nice style ,a bit hurried , I too would love to see a part 2 ......Start with a more detailed description of our space girl......breasts, sex, taste ,smell. Can they have children???? the "other worlds " are they monogamous ???

I do hope you write more .....

Stephen J

PLZ PLZ PLZ make this a series. I would love to read more of this. this is just too good a story to end here.