All Comments on 'A Dream Come True'

Nicely done. Keep up the great work.

How does this make her a cuckqueen? Who is her husband having all the affairs with?

Do you know what a cuckqueen is?

Really terrible writing. The entire story in 2-line paragraphs?

Poorly written. Hard to follow. Try again.

Poorly written. Twisted story doesn’t make much sense. Bleeding from her ass and she enjoys it ?Has the writer ever had anal sex?

Total crap

You tagged this as cuckquean. Where's the cuckqueaning?

Next, learn how to write dialogue from multiple people with out using names and colons (e.g. Boyle:). That's either just plain lazy or shows you have a long way to go in developing your writing skills.

"wife manipulated to be a cuckquean" was YOUR description of this story, however that was not what happen, she was never a cuckquean, her husband and her friend with benefits became cuckolds while she became a slut. the story itself even as a fantasy story was so far fetch made it hard visualize even with a fantasy part of the brain. For these reasons I gave it 2 stars.

Narcssist character is definately not alpha.

Couldn’t get past the first arrogant paragraph.

This story was poorly written so quite boring. Nothing to get excited about here.

Might want to check the definition of cuckquean

I love your story. Could you write for me 😜

So badly written it put me off. And nothing to do with cuckquean.

Just remove this and never write anything ever again.

Indian plot with American names