All Comments on 'A Dream Come True Ch. 04'

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Frankie1952Frankie19522 months ago

Sensational story, more please.

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikey2 months ago

Another great chapter! Can’t wait for more.

MaximusTheMadMaximusTheMad2 months ago

Keep it up. Great writing, fun story, what's not to like.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

A rotten story line with a big egotistical jerk for the main character who keeps fucking everyone and shitting on everyone that cares about him.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

If I was EM I would leave and tell Michael to go fuck himself. I thought the story was suppose to be about getting together with his sister and now that he has here he treats her like yesterdays garbage.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

keep it to the siblings, its clear she loves him.

unclemerv77unclemerv772 months ago

I like where this is going so far,

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I wish it'll just stay these two. I want Mike to stop fucking other females & be with Em only

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

He’s a jack-hole, doesn’t a care about anyone but himself. Real men wear condoms if that is what the lady desires and don’t whine about it later.

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Apparently, I joined 01/01/1970. I like to write. I wrote a single story back in 2014 and fell off of it hard. I've learned a lot since then, so I'm using this as a creative outlet for a while. I'm here for a good time, but not for a long time, so enjoy it while it lasts. I'm...

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