All Comments on 'A Dream Vacation'

"My wife"... "my wife"....over and over again. Since she was the only female there, "she" or "her" would suffice for describing what was happening to her, what she was doing, or what she is saying. Otherwise, a nice story.

I wasn't upset hearing you take pride in the fact that both are sharing in the action. I was more amazed, and pleased to read that without a previous 'hint' that the two guys found their own personal pleasure. You left the story line hanging with more than hints that a few more days of action will follow. After all, you do need more practice to be perfect. Tony Clarke in N TX