All Comments on 'A Drunken Tale Ch. 07'

The ending was rushed, like the author got bored with it and just wanted to get to the sex.

I guess it was a great Cinderella Snow White story. Even as a guy, I enjoyed that and could imagine being Grant in my younger days.

Thanks.

I didn't like this story in spite of it being well written.

I agree with the previous comment.

There was a lot of loose end, what the hell was grant doing at her house. What did he do to the father? What happen to them ? If you are going to write a story make sure the damn thing is finished

I would have liked to see more of their actual lives moments like Grant at work or Mary in school. Just small things to get the fullness of their personalities.

I've lurked on Lit for years, came here for a quick bit of relief, and found your story while looking for something else entirely. You had me riveted from Chapter 1 all the way to the end.

Thank you for writing this.

That was one of the best pieces I have read In quite a while. It is realistic as interesting. Thanks for the great read!!!

I am so happy you decided to bring this story to a conclusion. I have been anxiously awaiting an update and thought I would have to resort to emailing you. I just loved this story - am so happy that Mary did not let Grant slip out of her life - in reality we know she is going to have life-long issues with respect to her father - but she knows that someone is in her corner that loves and will support her. Have you thought of writing another story? Looking forward to reading it. Thanks!