All Comments on 'A Family Affair Ch. 12'

A good chapter to a very good story. Thanks.

What a chapter, absolutely great. Though I wouldn't have minded the strapon action a little more detailed, holy f that last page was hot. Keep it Up!

Enjoyed it - you sure keep yourself busy. So many series in progress and all great. 5*

Looking for a nice sloppy romantic ending to this story now. It has been so well written throughout and very enjoyable. It just goes to show that families go through traumas as well as good times. Fiction will always reflect reality.

Love your work but I though this one was rushed. Would have enjoyed about 4x the detail of the 4 girl weekend.

Can't wait for the ensuing chapters. Love your writing.

So who's the lucky girl who is going to take Mark's ass with a strapon?

Downgraded.

For three pages (long Literotica pages) the story has been treading water, on the verge of stagnant.

The typos are getting too distracting. Pronouns are continually getting jumbled. It's like you don't care.

All the pronoun swapping is really getting annoying. Can't who's doing what to who and with what! Get a proofreader.