All Comments on 'A Family Affair Ch. 13'

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Southpaw1430Southpaw1430almost 2 years ago

One of my favorite stories. Thank you for an excellent chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago
From Ethan S.

A really good chapter, though a few spelling errors. I like how Mark made Kelly more comfortable in opening up to him and that she was more in love with him like the other women of the family. Can't wait for more romantic moments from them and the other ladies. Make the next or later chapter where another female family member shows for love for Mark in a big way. And I hope Mark gets all the women pregnant and has the biggest amount of children with any of his female family members.

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