All Comments on 'A Family Journey'

that was the dumbest shit I ever read

When you say this:" I didn't date but I did fool around with Anita occasionally. We weren't lesbians, we weren't really attracted to each other sexually, just friends helping each other get some release."

You don't go to this: " 'Yes, I chose you and Anita,' she said emphatically. 'I've wanted you so badly.'

'Let's go to the other room, a bigger bed for the three of us,' Anita said helping Elena off of me. We spent the night exploring each other, making Sapphic love."

I really enjoyed the flow of this story. The dichotomy between the spirit world and the real world. I liked how she initially was friends with her friend and they evolved into a family unit. It was a moving piece

This is a great story please write more of these stores about a brother or grandmother and grandson or mother and daughter or father and son really would like to see these stores

Like the way you intertwined the culture into the story as I studied such practices and found the story to be very entertaining. Looking forward to reading more of your writings

A beautiful story, emotional at times particularly to those of us who have lost family in violence.

What a wonderful tale. I especially liked that it did tell a story with the sexual part being secondary. Thank you for sharing your work.

It was different from the usual suck & fuck stuff.

I enjoyed reading it Thank you.