All Comments on 'A Family that Lays Together...'

Fantastic! Almost nonstop sex that remained erotic through the entire story. I hope the author continues this story. I would love to see the results on Imelda’s body already hot and busty mature body from all the workouts she is now doing very seriously. More family time too. Imelda’s photography ought to be brought into the story as well. The author has written another terrific piece for erotic literature and I hope more will come.

I like the way the ultimate act is referenced and foreshadowed throughout the piece. The psychological aspect is also well dealt with.

Waaaay too long and too many words. 1/5

FAN "FUCKING" TASTIC!!!!!!

Beautiful touches that only a female perspective can bring. What a wonderful writer you are!

The attention to detail adds to the drama, like descriptions of the clothing the seductresses wear.

PLEASE WRITE MORE!