All Comments on 'A Fantasy about Love Pt. 18 - Final!'

What a great story..

Sometimes a little bit too much talk about wine.

But I love these people you created.

The story itself was great composed and even the problem with Eileen was fixed.

Three women would‘ve been too much.

A nice and lovely end.

Hi Buzios,

What I liked / disled in your story :

1/ The Inc story looked really true except that I don't imagine IBM hiring such idiots even in Australia/ You should have given the Cies other names...

2/ The sex descriptions are repetitive. I even found copied/pasted ones.

3/ I think that you could have extended the sex more clearly to threesomes or lesbians

4/ I never believe in first sex in the morning; I think that bathroom use is a must before sex.

5/ I have doubts about legal spouse sharing hubby with her mother and best friend. If you read some book about harem life, you will understand immediately

Nevertheless, I liked your story and I'm waiting for your next ....

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i thank you for your wonderfully spun out tale.not only a romantic tale but one that incorporated business,knowledge on wine, exploring foreign i understand more the culture and geography of oz a lot more.and all this from a brazilian

vinhedo 96(when i was there not my birth year)