All Comments on 'A Farmer's Offerings'

I disagree with the first comment. While not perfect, I thought it was very well written and fairly hot. True, the singular approach to telling the story is unorthodox but if the writer chooses this style and pulls it off, which she does then you can read it quite easily. I don't prefer this style myself but I still enjoyed the story.

But what about those vegetables?

You write beautifully! You make it seem as if the reader is with you making love to you love it!

Loved this well written story. I wish something like this could happen to me.

I expect the older, mature farmer to have a generous bit of chest hair that can be inviting to the younger woman. Something for her to touch, taste? run her fingers through. He seems a very sexy catch!