All Comments on 'A Fine Line'

by HerLittlePiggy

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Anthony1965Anthony1965almost 3 years ago

Absolutely love this story. I'd love to see another chapter where she is impregnated by Phil.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Wow just another reason why women will always be inferior

CarnaleyeCarnaleyealmost 3 years ago

Nice free flowing story full of hot erotica. The next chapter is eagerly awaited.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

what part of inane is missing?

Protagonist has a conscience for half of the first page. Add a black dick and the vows, the shared time and "love" go out the window in less than one evening. All decisions and all matters are precluded by the fictitious black dicky.

The author is an amazing piece of work. Only one focus and with zero redeeming value. Why is this person still wasting our oxygen? Just a random thought....

Buster2UBuster2Uover 2 years ago

Sterile Hubby means fertile wife playing around. Sounds like a Black Baby is on the way! 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Been more than 2 yrs you wrote this story...and we are still waiting for a following chapter !

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Question for the ladies: size does matter right? 5 I mean it's not a guarantee of good sex but it certainly helps increase the odds.