All Comments on 'A First Encounter'

but very obvious that English isn't your first language. Hard to follow some of it, you might want to find someone to edit for you before posting?

not a bad story at all

but very obvious that English isn't your first language. Hard to follow some of it, you might want to find someone to edit for you before posting?

You're right, however I had one.

Your story is very entertaining and feels very real. It was a good read. I have to agree that if you intend to continue writing in English, iot would be great to ask someone to proofread and edit. That said, please continue writing :)

Definatly want to read more. A nice change for the story not to be about domination but more about discovery

I like romance so I could just gave it 4 stars