All Comments on 'A First Time for Everything Ch. 02'

by curious_cait

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josephstevensjosephstevensabout 10 years ago
Very Promising...

A good start to what could become a great series of stories. You are taking it slow, which is nice, and the events are building very well...'3' soon please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
another sort start

why did you do 2 paragraphs then leave it to the reader to try to find the rest to evaluate later it is only worth a 1

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