All Comments on 'A Fishing Trip, But I'm The Bait Ch. 01'

Such a great description of the disgust, yet yearning, the tastes, the smells. So very real. Can't wait for more.

Oh yes! You've hit it just right. Jane has to turn up on Friday. This is too good not to post more chapters.

I hope there is more. Can't wait....

Thank you so much for your kind comments: I'm so touched. I've just posted the next part of her adventure and like Jane, I have much to learn, so your feedback is much appreciated. I know she has a way to go yet until she blossoms into a young woman so stay with me!

I can't decide which role I'd like to play in this story. The older male enjoying the sweet tight ass of an younger man or the young male sucking a hard cock until it explodes in his mouth and knowing that soon I will be fucked by that hard cock. The thick hard cock is winning right now. Can't wait to learn what he brings you to wear as you begin your awakening, Stickygirl.

Eagerly looking forward to part 2!

That was a very good first story. You wove a realistic scene. I look forward the the next installments. Keep having fun with your writing.

Brilliant sexy story !

Going to work my way through the others in the series x

I love to fish butt in this case, I'd rather be the bait!

Look forward to reading more of your work.

Now who wouldn't want to be the bait for a fisherman as described here?

A wonderful story.

I am floored with your first chapter itself and thoroughly excited that there are many more lined up and ready for reading. You are brilliant.

What a beautiful first time encounter! Soooo very hot! I do hope there's much more of Jane and Paul and ??? in the future! Also...those stinging nettles certainly are intriguing! 😊

What a pleasant discovery! I really enjoyed the pace of this one...a wonderful tension between wanting and hesitation. It brought memories, not of fishing so much...but other things. I'll be finishing this series for sure ;) Love the way you gently lay down the words...like the winding path along the riverbank, your words lead in a quiet and comforting way.

Hot! Got me nice and hard.

Great start! Looking forward to reading the rest.