All Comments on 'A Foray into Depravity'

A good story. You should keep it going

Great job on first story, simple and direct.

Good writing and a hot story. Please finish describing the rest of the honeymoon!

Great story!

It started off great but it becomes frustrating when the wife suddenly loses all sense of intellect, morals and become sex mad bimbos.

Might as well be fucking a robot.

More more more!!! Humiliate John!!! Make him a wimpy cock sucking a cuckold please?!?!

Very graphic. Well written. Five stars.

Very good story. Keep up the good work and ignore the ignorant haters who apparently don't know they're on a porn site.

Great start, but the sudden switch when she stormed off, followed by the inexplicable desire to humiliate her husband, destroyed the story.

She is taking a big load in her fertile pussy! 5 stars good job

Love that she couldn’t get it out of her head and went looking for it after the argument. Perfect time to show her husband who’s in charge and who can satisfy her the best. She deserves the best and shouldn’t her husband want that for her?

Gods yes!

You have got the writing flare my dear, if you are a women. This is the second story of yours I have read, and as a writer, I can only say. BRAVO. JEF

What we like, a short sext story, you nailed it x

Nice story But I have to say I don’t believe she depraved. Depraved is the husband finding out he gets excited seeing his wife become a submissive slut for a huge black cock. It’s natural for her to love being filled and serving a dominant black man. I’d love for him to own her the whole time they’re there.

But good stories and great tits.

I’d love for a Blackman hung like that to take my wife in front of me. Making her squeal and submit to his bigger cock and superior attitude. Leaving her exhausted with his cum running out of her when he climbs off her and walks away.

Nice!