All Comments on 'A Friend in Need'

I’m still on page one, but how does a man ugly as a feral cat and who can’t keep a job long afford a house in an exclusive gated community?

How is a 20 year old studying law at an Ivy League college? Law school is a professional school that follows a baccalaureate degree.

But while the concept was fine, the execution was not. If Cindy was getting it on with other women all along, why was she so sexually frustrated? If Cindy’s husband was such a pussy hound, why wasn’t he fucking her? Guys who cheat don’t stop fucking their own wives unless their wives are just no longer desirable, and that’s not how Cindy was described.

I got the impression that the sex scene was written by a guy who’d never had that good a sex before. It just didn’t seem real.

Well written and well done.

I usually don't agree with RR with his comments on anything, but this time he nailed this story perfectly. Author's name is an instant no for me, but after seeing RR's comment I skimmed it. Just more cheating whores.

And I've never thought that turning herself into a slut would help any woman feel good about herself. This was poorly thought out and badly written.

Cute story a fun read,a”4” from me.

@ReedRichards Re: Plot Hole - I'm not sure if understand your issue. Is it because he's got his baccalaureate and is only 20? It's rare, but I'm sure it happens. Is it studying law at an Ivy League college? Um, Harvard Law.

Good job there Mr Brooks103x, in working a mention of your alma mater into your comment.

The plot hole is partially deflected by Cindy’s dad having the biggest law firm in the area. It does NOT fill the hole, because it is unlikely that being raised in that level household would have Cindy even looking at anyone like her hubby!

Biggest deficit, IMHO, is virtually no tension in the story, once we get past the Bad Hubby (from whom We-The-Readers hear from very sparsely) cheating again. The rest is mainly two slots and a tab in a fairly vanilla (maybe French vanilla) set of configurations.

As also commented on, Cindy having a non-trivial history of girl-on-girl action diminishes her likelihood of feeling less than attractive. The notion that women in relations with each other are likely to be supportive of each other is certainly plausible.

3*. decent stroker if you go straight to the hot-tub as fast as possible.

Not much of a plot, but writing was good. Major problem is that I find it unbelievable that any spouse would ever send a picture admitting adultery to the other spouse. So many downsides to that admission and no upside, and so why would anyone do it?

Load of nothing.

Don't like this stuff normally but you did an outstanding job describing the interaction of the lovers. Really good work.

this was well written and enjoyable to read. On the fence on the morality of it, personally would've waited post divorce but to each their own.

seemed like this was turning into a polygamy relationship more than just a bit of sharing

I loved it...

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★★★★★ (5)!

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Excellent, all the erotic hotness, and I could watch it taking place on the movie screen of my mind, thanks.

But their weekend surely must not be over?

Decent

Could have been two pages.

What can o e say, but WHEW!!

Hot idea, ok story, good parts got me wet, fuck the morality police. If I'd volunteered my husband for a mercy fuck, he'd do it, he'd do it without me suggesting it, he did it several times without the broken hearted woman, too. Was he livid with my revenge fuck when I tried out a black coworkers BBC a few times.