All Comments on 'A Friend in Need Pt. 02'

Great follow up story but I think there is more mileage in this story yet so I hope you soon write another follow up story 5 Stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️🍯🍩🍆

Chapter 1 was better.

When they went to the other ladies home Janet said Cloe was Jims daughter, not his grand daughter. Check your spelling, too,means as well, not coming to, as in awakening. Still enjoyable, and there is another chapter in there, if you want to add Mary and Janet to his harem.

Chloe should get her wish. They should both return and render Grandpa unconscious with a big smile on his face.

Top story, the minor errors noted by others didn't cause a problem. If you can do chapter 3, or 4, or more, I'd love to read them.

I was right. You have the makings of a master storyteller. A little careful editing and it will be better than ever. A tip. When you complete a story. close it and don't reopen for a full 24 hours. You will be surprised at how many little errors you will pick up.

Nice, gentle, and respectful approach with everyone satisfied. I'd like to see more energy. In my experience, precum doesn't spurt or shoot. it oooooozes.