All Comments on 'A Friend Indeed Ch. 01'

by WholyChao

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
A Friend Indeed

great story till you got to this line.

"There began a marathon cock-sucking that would be to tedious to enjoy if I took the time to properly tell it."

if you had continued with your story instead of adding that line I would have given you a 5 but now its a 4.

the rest of the story was great, but don't shortchange us at the end because you are in a hurry to post the story.

I look forward to the next chapter in the story, hopefully it will be even better.

m4mleedsm4mleedsalmost 3 years ago

Great, be even better with more details about the smells and tastes of your cock and balls and her cunt.

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