by Sean Renaud
For all those that don't have a sense of humor, just go away. This was delightful, great fun! Why the shotgun? The husband was just messing with Lex and had a great time doing it. I loved the "whateveristan" and other "istans" throughout. Just well done!
Thanks!
OMG did I really just read that? I must make a note of the author's name so I can avoid another similar experience.
Gay or not, I don't think he will want to raise Lex's kids. It would be obvious they weren't his and that would be bad for business.
You guys that complain are idiots for not seeing it coming when he said "he's never cheated on me with a women." That's why she'd be so mad if he slept with another women not only is she his cover but she's a fag hag lmao.
She's going to kill him if he fools around with another woman. But fooling around with a guy is okay? And if he's gay and they're in a fake relationship, why is he loading the shotgun? Boy was THIS ever stupid.
Lacking imagination and content. A poorly written and thought out story. This author has written many stories of little quality and is possibly one of the least able, one for me to avoid their contributions in future.
I just wasted 3 minutes of my life. Probably the worst story I have ever read on this site.
Absolute crap and it makes no sense that she would tell us that she would divorce her husband if she found him in bed with another woman when she knows he's gay and therefore they aren't having sex and their marriage is a sham.
One of the worst on this here site !!!
My impression is that you could work on your gender dialog more. Maybe females talk with male phrases in the black community, but in this case it didn't work for me when she described herself. As already said, interesting twist. As to misogyny, it reminds me of a comment I think I read in Penthouse long ago. A male wrote in complaining about having to see penises, and especially erect penises in the pictures of women. Wow, what internal fears about himself he must have had.
I mean the story wasn't that funny or that well written but it was fantastic to see how it upset all the pathetic excuses for men who hide behind their misogynistic tough guy facades. For that alone it deserves top marks. Sorry you guys I just realised you probably didn't understand my comments because I used some big words.
....said "he had never cheated on her with a woman".-so why be so prolific a writer when almost all your very diverse stories have either tells or factual shifts in them? Write less,you'll write better-pistolpackinpete
Hey it is just a nice original twist on a story and quite funny,lol.
Who let the 11 year old write this site and post it. This has to join to the top 10 worst on literotica.
Put it where it belongs so we dont waste time reading it.
that is supposed to be erotic. No I get it she is just a high priced whore that serves as cover for a gay guy. But the gay guy doesnt want to have to raise a off color bastard from a whores cunt.
been in humor and satire then maybe they would have got it was a joke story good one guy