All Comments on 'A Futa Mom's Adventure'

Really enjoyed reading your story, and would love to see how far mom pushes daughter

I love the Futa stories. This one has a good start please continue.

Thanks for wasting my time. Trash.

A very good start to an interesting story. next chapter please

Waste of time reading this garbage,

Ugh!

I liked it good start it has innumerable possibilities. It started fast from obviously no mention of sex prior even tho the daughter knew of the cock. Transitions don't go that fast but it worked for me and I'm sure others. I mean this is fiction and you are aiming for a place in the game.... good job....

breakout stories are always the hardest! don't let the naysayers ruin your day.

I enjoy a nice, hot short story from time to time and this one was very hot. I'd love to read more work

Maybe it should be classed as science fiction but by any name it's a 5 star hot cock-raising story.

Is it possible Mom could knock up her daughter in a future episode ?

Great job dude keep them up, just maybe a longer story next time

It's well written and it's quick and to-the-point.

Past to present to past tense again every other paragraph made it hard to read. The story was rushed like you had 1 thing you really wanted to write and just couldn't wait to get there making the rest seem needless and not planned out before you started writing. Again interesting idea just needs a bit of patience and review before rushing it out

But an excellent and promising one! I think you are missing tension. Though it is clear that some don't think you need it. If you want it try adding how the daughter finds out about her mom, or how the world accepts her (the mom).

Similarly add some internal monologue. WHY is the daughter into this, how did she get there. Even if both parties are completely on board from the start this is going to take time.

PLEASE don't take my comments negatively! You don't siffer from any actual problems. These are just my personal thoughts that would jave drawn out the story and made it more enjoyable for me. Feel free to disregard them entirely! :-)

Possible rewrite, draw the story out, possible back story for mother and daughter. Maybe describe them?

wish i coyld have them daily myself

Past tense or present tense. Pick one and stick with it.

Amazing story. I look forward to reading more about Julie and Alice.

Great story and would love to read more..

nice idea but it wold be better if the daughter was a virgin and got pregnant from the mother

hot and very horny futa incestous story i love it,thank you.

Story Wasn't Long Enough