All Comments on 'A Futa Queen & Her Subby Servant'

I think Evelyn finding her inner domme sounds like a fantastic idea

A combination between idea one and idea 2.

The story is ok - it is definitely, a 'walk on the wild side' of what I normally prefer to read. So, in keepimg with that thought of being out of my mainstream straight hetro preferences, I think I will vote for option 1. May as well explore more of the world of kink and get right into - none hurtful - rope bondage. I think these characters would definitely fit well in that environment.

Now, something serious I need to say; there are literally dozens of careless errors in this story. An editor, or even a good Beta reader is definitely needed, to clean these up. It kicks the reader right out of the story when they have to stop enjoying the story flow to trying to interpret what is actually meant as opposed to what is written.

the first one

Saw this only now, but I'm glad the series continues!

I'd prefer 1) or maybe 3) of the alternatives