All Comments on 'A Game Ch. 2'

What an incredible tale. Thank you. Is there to be more or was that the end? Your writing is well crafted and has a personal touch. Bravo!

I loved the greater intensity of chapter 2. You did a fantastic job of painting the images onto the mind of your readers. The only thing I could see where it could improve is to display your character better, hair color, chest hair...no chest hair... skin tone.. etc. overall, a fantastic story!

this story was hot and sweet..

I loved it :)

I love these stories about being initiated into the role of a sub.

I loved the story and so wanted to be in her place!