All Comments on 'A Game for Learning about Yourself Ch. 07'

"Es gibt Platz für dich" better translates as "there is a place for you" or " there's room for you" depending of the level of irony the men wants to show. Yes, Germans know irony, especially if used against people considerd at a lower social or moral standing.

The story feels slightly railroaded to level 4 and beyond, like a different take of the 150th alternative ending. The games are feeling a little compressed, I wouldn't mind a few detours.

Excellent work, as always - keep it up!

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This game Spielmann again made his usual side bet for women finishing in second place. At the next game it would be hot and a nice variation if somebody made a side bet with Stephanie where, (if she loses the bet) rather than becoming an extra center at the gangbang, she instead must get some sort of permanent body modification - for instance a piercing or tattoo or a treatment to remove all body hair below her neck, such as laser hair removal (so that she'll remain completely bare down there henceforth, without even a hair to cover her modesty!)

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Tattoo options are unlimited, but likely would require some sort of humiliating words built-in, similar to the t-shirt slogans from the photoshoot. From a list of such samples, Stephanie could pick the precise phrase for her tattoo, once she loses the side bet, and it'd be extremely sexy if she chose the words "Baby Factory" or similar, inked permanently just above her vagina (maybe with arrows pointing down?). How humiliating and arousing at the same time!

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She could take comfort in telling herself that an above-the-vag tattoo isn't visible when wearing normal clothes, and perhaps Stephanie might even be allowed to let the tattoo artist include embellishments like twisting vines or chains around the letters, or some artistic swirling font, such that a person catching a casual glimpse of her tattoo would not necessarily realize what it says because the weird-shaped letters mesh or blend in with the overall design.

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Most likely Stephanie will play the next Level 3 game at the Nevada facility, later that month (November). She's already gone through the embarrassing application process with the photoshoot for the 'Supersluts' website, so she might as well play for another $15,000. Why not? When she play, it'd be really hot if several club members make various side bets with her regarding permanent body art/modifications/etc. Maybe one club member makes one bet with her for the tattoo, and another club member makes a different bet for the laser hair removal, and so forth. And naturally, Stephanie won't be able to avoid loses one or more of those bets. :)

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Just a thought.

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I'm also excited for the narrative to return back to the states to check in with Naomi and find out how things are developing for her!

Love how the story is coming,

Only criticism I might add is that it feels a bit predetermined/predictable that she will play through the levels and eventually end up enslaved and impregnated. The suspense and perverse thrill of unexpectedly raised stakes was the best part of sex slave lottery in my opinion. Little bits of foreshadowing e.g. seeing the women she thought were slaves pushing strollers is perfect.

The side bets are a great angle to play, as you can create mini side plots following the mishaps of other women in fantasies that might otherwise dead end the main story arc were they to involve main characters. Would also go some way towards deepening and fleshing out the world you are living in.

no pun intended

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A good run to get to the level four, now take your time with the finale. Side bets, bribery, and multiple rounds of fertility games await. Write at least three drafts, preferably more. Naomi gets hers hard and fast. Steffi has to be pushed to her limits. A player of your choice has a deep realization. And a twist! Have fun finishing.

I am looking forward to the rules at the next level, as well as the side bets