All Comments on 'A Game of HORSE Pt. 01'
by emelle78
- 16 Comments
eviltwin52about 3 years agoExcellent. Very good in the telling and very hot. Well done my friend. Well done.
Anonymousabout 3 years agoA story that discribes the giving into the feelings of being submissive in fem to another male. Such a sweet surrender.
5 stars.
Shrek5898about 3 years agoI wish that I’d had friends like Peter and Katie when I was in high school
Anonymousabout 3 years agoWhy aren’t there more friends like them? It would have made life so much easier for so many.
Anonymousover 2 years agoA Good Story Up to the point of the GAY Stuff. Male friends don't do those things to each other!
If anything if you wanted to go with a submissive male, with a slight, build, because he did not develop properly like other males in school. That could getaway with dressing as a female. A aggressive, dominant sister of your good friend, that would and could take advantage of you. Your good friend okay with playing basketball and other normal male activities but also okay with his sister playing with you, dominating you for her own fun! You could of built on that story line. Much more erotic then where the story ended up. Some Dressing up, shaving, forcing him, B&D, S&M, D&s, Control, Edging, Denial, Public, Humiliation, Embarrassment, Cunnilingus, So many other things Katie could make Brandi do for her amusements and pleasure!
After all this is suppose to be erotica! It is suppose to turn the reader on not make him or her sick for reading it!
Anonymousabout 2 years agoI don't think I would like something stuck on me that would make me look like a woman. A bra with tits in them so I could take it off when we finish the roleplay, I would do that.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoIt was a very good build up, but you went way too many paragraphs before the guy had an orgasm. As you move into change in action, you want a flow of what is happening, and to spend too much time on a single area will cause a reader to lose interest. but otherwise written well
