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by JBEdwards

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legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesabout 4 years ago
Interesting story

Maybe you should have saved it for the Halloween contest. A few glitches but certainly worthy of the 5 stars I gave it. More to follow in a PM.

davp6255davp6255about 4 years ago
climàtic. mind warp

What a climatic end to this tale. If my wife had a mind like yours I would not be celibate.

prinnaveaprinnaveaabout 4 years ago
Good Story

I don't really understand all the Fibonacci math but the story was ( only description I can think of) cute and humorous in parts. I like what that spell turned out to be.

I thought it was well written.

KingCuddleKingCuddleabout 4 years ago
Do Years show in Roman numerals?

I never can really tell what's true in your stories...

But you are fun!

Works for me!

Hiker66BikerHiker66Bikerabout 3 years ago
A brilliant, creative story

What a great story! A well deserved 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You are an excellent writer.

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