All Comments on 'A Gift of The Goddess Ch. 02'

I should like to say this is fascinating. Unfortunately I lack the imagination to be stimulated by this particular approach to erotic writing. Something about dog liking the dog food may be appropriate. However, for the .0001% of the species that is into this, I am sure it satisfies bizarre tastes effectively. My tastes are more pedestrian.

I love your story and the protagonist's fetishes, but there is very little pain and torture for Loviatar. There are many new interesting characters. Goddess of poison and disease, a soulless psychopathic princess, Sally is his former lover. The most difficult character is Talona because she has to spread poisons and diseases.

My personal tastes are quite vanilla flavored but I'm experimenting with styles and concepts to find what works for me. I'm a self admitted swine trying to emulate the pearls that have occasionally been tossed before me -- thanks for giving my efforts a try.

Thank you so much for your time and attention -- I'm not exactly spoiling anything by revealing that sometimes I'm working through my personal comfort level through my writing so yeah Max's relationship with Loviatar and by extension BDSM is evolving as I grow more comfortable with my personal boundaries vs what I can coherently write about. I'll consider my job done if Max seems like a credible switch vs a whiney bottom

If you want Max to become a switch, then go for it, but I personally like him more as a true bottom. No fan of him being whiny, but a true cock addict.

The story is amazing, and I can’t wait to see what you have planned, even if it isn’t 100% my fantasy. Great stuff!

Thank you for your kind words and attention.

Forgotten Realms, warhammer 40k, futanari, femboys, *and* the bdsm goddesss??? It's like a dream cum true

Thank you for taking the time to read my work

Excellent stuff, mate. I hope you expand on it.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review,

This series is the best I think I've ever read in this site! I love it so much and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!