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All Comments on 'A Girl Gone Ch. 02'

by BarefootMouse1983

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Nope. You ain't getting any better at this.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Wow that was powerful and poetic . It's worth 5 to me

Paul4playPaul4play7 months ago

Excellent!

In a very brief story you have recreated the intense emotional burden of your past and how you have come to own it in the present.

This is raw and transparent.

And erotic.

nolaguy58nolaguy587 months ago

J. This is erotic literature. Thanks for sharing.

PicklepopperPicklepopper6 months ago

This one is crazy. Amazing poetry at the end.

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You see, writing is very sexual to me. It should feel like making love, in my opinion. Not some spit on it and stick it in kind of fucking, mind you as we barely found time to get your pants down around your ankles. That's for the supposed superior male poets with the littl...

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