All Comments on 'A Girl Gone Ch. 07'

by BarefootMouse1983

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MaydaypilotMaydaypilot7 months ago

Another remarkable piece. A moving kaleidoscope with unexpected emotions suddenly appearing with stunning clarity… then disappearing… and then another.

Paul4playPaul4play7 months ago

A fine bit of erotica!

A patchwork of libidinous emotions that carry the reader to arousal, desire, and climax.

Perfect story for the voyeur in me…..

Paul4playPaul4play7 months ago

Second reading: I would love the visual of Roland and Heather.

Did you get to watch and hold her hand as she came?

sferguson53sferguson536 months ago

Very dark and gritty. I can really see the town and the people.

PicklepopperPicklepopper6 months ago

You really put it all out there

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You see, writing is very sexual to me. It should feel like making love, in my opinion. Not some spit on it and stick it in kind of fucking, mind you as we barely found time to get your pants down around your ankles. That's for the supposed superior male poets with the littl...

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