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Click hereShe had to be at work at three. With bathing, eating, and the trip back, it was close but we made it with fifteen minutes to spare.
As we were pulling into the store, she said, "I have to go home tonight but come see me."
I asked, "Need a ride?"
She replied with a big smile, "See you at 11:15."
When I arrived at the store, Sam was ready to go. She was leaning against the wall of the store and when she saw me, she broke into a big grin, ran to the car and kissed me.
"I really missed you tonight, she giggled.
"I missed you, too." I replied.
On the way to her place, she said that she did not think that it would be a good idea for me to take her to her house and asked me if I minded dropping her off at the front of the development. When I dropped her off, she kissed me and said, "See ya tomorrow." She ran about ten steps, turned in the headlights, waved, and blew me a kiss.
That was the last time I saw her. She did not show up for work the next night or the next. When I asked what happened to Sam, I was told, "Clerks come and clerks go, especially the young ones."
The worst ending I've encountered since "Re-Gifting". Fantastic story and the ending just collapsed the whole story.
I think you should have definately ended this differently, I could actually see these two together
I know bad and sad things happen; that's why they have soap-operas, but do you need to put them in otherwise good stories? You could have left out the last few sentences, leaving her at the development, and left a much better story. I was debating on whether to give it a 5. Now I won't rate it, because I don't want to drop your average but I can't give it much. It ruined my enjoyment completely.
Good story until the end, and then very disappointing. I rate those kinds of stories accordingly....
Thats right keep us glued to the story right up till the end and then drop it on us that she was never seen again. Great I truly liked the story keep them coming.
i didn't know an erotic story could leave one feeling mushy and touched. Your story did that to me. I am not in my early 20's but I fell in love with you, Studs!
loved this story!