All Comments on 'A Good Challenge'

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justwarped2018justwarped2018almost 4 years ago

loved like to read more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Very well written. Erotic. Descriptive. Good tutorial. Very good description of the feelings and emotions of both participants

gorsongorsonalmost 4 years ago

great story - very well-written and I really enjoyed the pace of the build-up thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Nice premise.

I sure would have liked it more if she'd teased him more with her breasts and ass. Playing with them while he watched, and she described what he was missing, what she was feeling, etc. Rubbing her breasts on him, perhaps a tit fuck for a while, and a little mouth action. Rubbing his cock head against her dripping pussy lips, and against her asshole while she told him how hot she was for him, and what she'd do to him after he gave her the safe code.

Gave it 4 stars. Could have been 5.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Shese a little expensive to have around but I really like her, your bigger a bigger pervert than I am , more please ,

VancouverManVancouverManalmost 3 years ago

So good!

Great images. I love that she takes pleasure in his frustration. Would have been interesting if she had denied him that last release……😵‍💫

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Excellent story and prose! Probably the best I've seen in years!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

MORE OF THESE PLEASE! Very hot read

jklendcrawjklendcrawover 1 year ago

This is one of my favorites that I've read on here so far! I love the game aspect of it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

My cock is so hard (after reading this story), wishing my wife would get off her damn phone call, 'cuz she wouldn't know what hit her!

InfiniteXaosInfiniteXaos8 months ago

Using the vibrator was cheap :/ aha. Also, sad he couldn't hold out just a little longer :c If she wanted it to last, she shouldn't have teased him so much, she had to have known he wouldn't last long. Lol.

InfiniteXaosInfiniteXaos8 months ago

Also, she lost. He said she could tickle but it couldn't be used as torture, which it was.

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My writing focuses generally on what I like to read: sensual, consensual, power exchange, with a heavy tilt toward orgasm control/denial. You're unlikely to find significant pain play in my stories, or anything that would suggest non-consensual sex or coercion beyond what the ...