All Comments on 'A Good Tip'

I saw what was coming, but it was still a great use of the classic pizza deliver guy porno scene. I was actually hearing that classic porno music in my head as I read this.

5-stars.

Good use of role play.

To use that classic line; "Here's the pizza, and here's the pepperoni."...

You gave it away way too soon by him using her name. Keep them guessing until the very end next time.

They is some really odd people here.

loved the twist

Something gave it away early on. It was fairly hot, but realizing the end ruined it for me. 3 stars.

Bill S.

I knew there was something up when he knew her first name. It would have been better to not give it away so soon.