All Comments on 'A Great Meal but a Better Lay'

I like your voice and the use of a female perspective, which must be difficult for a male writer. You didn't over-do the celebrity angle but kept it in the plot, making the story more interesting. On that note, I would like to politely request the use of Christina Hendricks as a character. The sex/plot line was a little bit of a grand tour and might have benefited from a focus on one of the four activities as a personal favorite of her's.