All Comments on 'A Halloween Love Story Ch. 02'

by Cristal_di_Canta

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A very good story! It looks like you spell check your stories but don’t grammar check them. There are words there that are spelled correctly but do not make sense in the context of the sentence. What does the rest of you look like? You have an attractive face & if I was in England I’d be interested in possibly meeting you.

BrendaNWBrendaNWover 2 years ago

Thank you for such a wonderfully beautiful story that touched me deeply. I have been looking for someone to love and be loved just like Jim .. I deeply yearn to feel in person what Sam is feeling .. it feels like being thirsty for a very long time and finally having a long deep tasty drink .. so quenching that it makes you feel weak at the knees and satisfied at the same time .. that is my dream .. and you touched my soul .. Tiffany

Cristal_di_CantaCristal_di_Cantaover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you Tiffany, I am so pleased you enjoyed it and there are so many lovely people in this world I am sure one will turn up soon. I wasn't actually intending to write this second part but I could see that things had been left a bit unfinished so rushed this out. Sorry about 'their' being a grammatical issue or two, hope it didn't ruin it!

SabrinaGLangtonSabrinaGLangtonover 2 years ago

Loved this, loved the ending, just perfect, thank you for all of your stories...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

More!! More!!

BrittneyjessicaBrittneyjessicaalmost 2 years ago

You’re such a great writer and I enjoy reading them .

I can’t wait to embark on more of your stories .

Keep in touch gorgeous.

SatyrDickSatyrDickalmost 2 years ago

[02.08.22]

Beautiful story, Beautifully written.

Great and flowing dialogue, believable characters.

11/10 Witchy Costumes!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

lovely story, (very well written) Thank you for taking me on this journey

dovbear88dovbear884 months ago

Beautifully written. Well paced.

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