All Comments on 'A Halloween Tale'

I loved the build up, you can't stop there. What happens next?

I loved it! You can't stop there... I have to know what happens!!!

The ending's just so cold hearted, so calculated to hurt, yet there's the prospect of such a great relationship here. His earlier callous words shouldn't stand in the way of a potentially loving relationship.

At least that's this reader's opinion.

Kydreamer

aw, hell! You can't stop there! Have mercy! I want them together or make it a series with her adventures and at the end her with will. Anyway, the story can't end here. Well written, truly enjoyed! Thanks!

I like women who are willing to play the game the way a man does. Awesome story!

That was fantastic, but then I again, I have come to expect that in your stories. I felt kind of bad for Will in the end. I hope you continue this story. Could it be that Will isn't as bad as he seems to be or that Karen isn't as much of a friend she seems to be. Hope to see more of Ella and Will's story. Great Job.

I would love to read the next chapter!

OH MY GOD THAT WAS SO INCREDIBLY HOT I AM CREAMY

PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS I NEED TO KNOW IF SHE CAN GET PAST THIS AND THEY HAVE A GOOD SEXUAL RELATIONSHIP

Please, please, please. Excellent story.

I have to agree with the other posters, this needs a sequel, I want to know what happens to them.

Ella can't leave Will or herself hanging like that. Please, please write a sequel.

Yash

It was sexy and funny and nice to see a sista take some control. I'm with the other posters- sequel please!

Awesome. I usually only check out male writers but every once in awhile a truely wonderful female writer comes along and I pay my complements. Great job.

When is the next part do out! I have been with a white man for 9 years and wow that was really hot we both enjoyed this story together!

Whip lash from lust of lies,to love of your enemy.

Very good beginning! About to read chapter 2

I seen your story on wattpad and there was a part 3 but my question is, is there more to your story?