All Comments on 'A Halloween Treat'

Pretty good story…. However, I would have enjoyed an alternative ending where the stepmom would up pregnant as a result of their hookup, as his dad had had the snip and his mother was not using any birth control.

think you should do another after she figures out it was the step son

Should have been longer story

Please stop all the comments with wanting someone to get pregnant.

Please get an editor to help with your stories. Too many commas, and mostly in the wrong places. Made it impossible to read.

Wow

Hilarious !!

Very nice story an well written as well, thanks!. I agree with a chapter 2 with the mother getting pregnant, and knowing it was her son the entire time. 4/5 for not finishing the story.

I enjoy your story. I would ignore anybody that stays anonymous to make stupid negative comments. If they do not like what is written on this site. Then they should write something themselves or stop reading. As for "get pregnant" comments. Write the way you like.

Wow, you should learn to write. That was horribly written and not worth reading

Great story! Thank you!

Elvira sure is a popular MILF costume. :)

5 Stars. That was good…….but I would love to find out she learned it was him.

Please write a follow up story to this one.

On Page 1, first paragraph.

Learn the difference between "too" and "to".

C'mon. How hard can that be?

Very good so far. Need to have her figure out it was her step son at some point and somehow got him to fuck his sister . . . .

Stupid.

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hawt, haWT, HAWT!

11/10!!!!!