All Comments on 'A Happy Marriage Pt. 01'

A good start as your first story. Slow down and enjoy each interaction as it felt a bit rushed. Your innnocence is shown with 'hitting the spot inside'. It's sexy for you to share the female perspective but no woman I know describes it like that. Keep writing and we will keep enjoying.

Short and simple...

I hope you take these story series down a very wrong path...make shalini a "hidden slut" inside with the "satisavitri" outside...

Good luck man!