All Comments on 'A Harsh Initiation'

Love the way the dom tested tolerance before continuing!

That was rather breathtaking, Flick. Despite the ominous title, it was instead quite... romantic. The narrator's voice rang true, with the immediacy of her erotic sensory perception, freshness & originality of observation and expression in places, and - best of all - a sense of the arousal of the writer in the *act of writing... the hallmark of good erotica. Please, let's see more! ~P.M.