by Origin40
So your sex scenes where hot but the fact you kept including the emotional turmoil of Hazel in the end caused the 2 stars on this and the last chapter.
A body will cum with stimulation regardless. The fact that you gave us insight into Hazel's emotions and thoughts and the fact she *clearly* did not want this takes it from a sub discovering CNC and turns it into a *victim* being raped.
Not sure if you were ever planning on writing a fourth, but ESPECIALLY after this one I’d love the next to be Hazel getting vengeance, either legally or more… personally. There’s a lot of non-con on this site, but it might be nice to have the victim successfully report people for once. Or lacking that, take bloody vengeance on them.