A Heart Divided Ch. 06

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She leaned forward, putting more pressure on my shoulders and gripping tight with her fingers. I thought of the marks she might leave. Was that intentional? She stopped moving up and down and began sliding back and forth. I knew she was trying to stimulate her clit to get her over the edge, so I lifted my hips to help improve the angle. She sighed in appreciation and collapsed onto me, wrapping her arms around my neck. Her face was beside me on the pillow, making her little cries and whimpers sound like shouts. I rubbed my hands up her sides and down to her hips, slowly, consistently.

Then I slipped one hand between us and cupped her breast. Gina gasped and pushed herself up a bit. "Do it!" she begged. I took her nipple in my mouth. The slightest pressure with my lips around it was the last piece of the puzzle for her. Her hips jerked forward as she cried out, and my cock slipped out of her, falling with a thump onto my stomach. Gina moaned in frustration and tried to push back onto it. I reached down and lined us up to meet one of her thrusts.

The sudden fullness made her grip me tight around the neck. She mumbled with her face in my hair, "cumming... cumming... O fuck... O fuck... cumming... mmmhmmmm..." She writhed on top of me, legs moving aimlessly, wildly around, trying to capture the feel of my skin but also at the mercy of her spasms. And just when I thought she was winding down, she did one more grind with her pelvis and started shaking again, lifting her head up and giving one long, wordless groan.

Rubbing her back, I asked, "Like that?"

She laughed, and I felt her breasts jiggle against my chest. "Just like that." And then she dropped her head onto the pillow. She closed her arms around me, her elbows tightening around my ribs and her hands on my shoulders. She kissed my neck and shoulders, then mumbled, "you close?"

I realized I wasn't- I had been so distracted by trying to make things work for her that I wasn't feeling my own drive to release.

"Not yet, but I don't think that'll be a problem."

"How do you want me?" she asked, wiggling her hips and kissing around my chest and shoulders.

"Since I'm guessing you still don't want to kiss my mouth..."

"Un-uh," she grunted, moving her lips along my collarbone.

"And you don't want me to get up and wash."

"Nope..."

"How about you turn around and give me a view that will take my mind off your gorgeous lips?"

"OK," she breathed out, straightening up.

She started moving up and down, rotating a little with each small bounce. She moved until she was facing my feet, then started riding me that way. I groaned at the sight of her ass moving steadily up and down in front of me- why had we never done this before? Gina's hips and butt were amazing to watch. I tentatively put my hands on her hips and ran them along the curve of her cheeks, not wanting to break the spell she had put me in.

When she leaned forward and put her hands on the bed between my legs, the change in sensation took me to the next level- I was ready to start pushing towards my own climax. Holding her hips, I pulled her down onto me and started thrusting up. Gina stopped pushing down, finding it hard to synch with my erratic thrusts. That worked better for me- I could pull on her hips and she would follow my lead that way.

I felt like I could get a lot deeper in that position, and the feel of her pubic bone rubbing along the underside of my shaft hastened my cum. I felt my balls getting ready to release their load, and my breathing started to come out as incoherent grunts. I looked up and Gina and could see from the side that her boobs swaying, smacking against her body with my thrusts. That image, and the feel of her walls gripping me down to my base drew out a few hard thrusts up into that perfect body.

I pulled her hips hard on the last thrust, and Gina responded by pressing down on me with all the force she could. I felt so deep inside her as I began to release.

"gah-AHHHH! ... ffffuuUCK! ... GinnnAAAAAGGGHH!"

Each pulse coincided with an upward jerk of my head and chest, lifting off the pillow. I pulled out a little and pushed in again, still cumming hard. I felt Gina's fingers furiously brushing her entrance- the steady pressure adding to my pleasure and hopefully accelerating hers.

As I lowered my butt to the bed and stopped pumping out cum, Gina was still rubbing her clit with one hand and massaging one of her nipples with the other. I lay there, sucking in air and watching from behind as she dropped her head and started gasping. She fell forward, and one hand caught her fall. I felt her tunnel tighten around me again as I began to soften. She came softly, briefly, then breathed out slowly.

After a few deep breaths, she looked back at me and asked, "Ready?" Grabbing the condom at my base, I said, "Go ahead." She dismounted and wobbled to the bathroom. We both cleaned up and I flipped through the limited selection of channels to find something to watch in bed. As we settled in next to each other, relishing the feel of our skin together under the covers, my phone rang. Knowing that Lynn was probably checking on me, I gave Gina a helpless look.

Putting the phone to my ear, I said, "Hey."

"Just checking to make sure your flight got in OK."

"Yeah, it's fine. I'm settling in at the hotel now." Gina ran her fingertips along my chest and watched my face as I talked.

"Are you going to get dinner soon? I know it's earlier there."

"I'll be fine, Lynn. I'm going to bed early so I'll be refreshed in the morning."

"OK...just...let me know how it goes."

"Alright- I don't know how involved this process is, though, so don't call tomorrow and interrupt."

"OK. But you'll call me tomorrow night?"

I thought for a few seconds. "No, Lynn. I want some time to think...remember? You kind of dumped a lot of stuff on me this week, and I don't feel ready to respond yet."

"OK, Gary." Then a long pause. "Gare? I'm sorry."

"I know. I'll see you Sunday."

"I love you."

"Bye."

I put the phone down and squeezed Gina. She mumbled, "Well that wasn't at all awkward."

"Aren't you supposed to give me a blow job or something while I'm on the phone with my wife? Isn't that how it goes in the stories?"

"What stories?" she teased, feigning shock as she lightly massaged my cock in her hand. "What kind of stories have you been reading, Gareth?"

I blushed, realizing I had given something away. Then she smiled and put her head on my chest. "We'll have to compare notes sometime."

I laughed lightly, and Gina's head bounced as my chest shook.

She did blow me later, after a mindless action movie had ended. I returned the pleasure with my fingers, and then we slept until the dawn found us again gasping and moaning in each other's arms.

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underdog1underdog1almost 2 years ago

Sorry, but well before she came back after 9 mos., he should have filed for divorce. With no contact at all, not even knowing if she was still in the country, or even alive, it was over. And now that he let her back in the house, Gina the girlfriend/mistress should tell him to shit or get off the pot.

dgfergiedgfergieover 3 years ago
messed up people

Why would anyone even consider taking a spouse back after they left with no explanation after 9 months. Then she comes back because she's got her head on straight now? No, she's got real issues. How can they even think about picking up where they left off? Then there is his new girl and his wife and he loves them both. My advice? Get the hell out of town and leave them both, he's just getting greedy now???

Less sex more why that makes sense.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Hey guess what...

I didn't know anything about what happens to Gina and Gareth in the end. Until I read the notes at the beginning of this story. Yeah, thanks for that.

Moralez18PTMoralez18PTover 6 years ago
Disagreeing with lb_says

Considering all the conflict we see in Gina on the other story, considering also her the emotional distance that she tries to insert here, it's very believable that the story she tells Andrew and Dottie was remembered through rose-tinted glasses.

All the blame she puts on Andrew for forcing her into sex (which he calls her out on), all the baggage she carries, the distance from her parents and all of that, it's very believable that the "not-yet-matured" Gina would have seen herself as the only victim in this Gina-Garreth relationship, painting him with an "evil" paintbrush.

This is really well written so far... It's not making me mad at her, more like sad for him and really sad that Dottie and Andrew don't get a chance to know the full story...

Like their hate for him might be just a little misplaced...

That being said, I haven't read the abortion part yet, so we'll have to see how that goes

Ib_SaysIb_Saysover 6 years ago
Should have used another character

I think it's a big mistake to use Gina from "A Strange Arrangement" for this story.

Not only does it spoil the ending, and I guess some would argue that it's about the journey, but those someones are probably women with lousy tastes in movies. I prefer there to be a bit of a mystery, especially if it's spoiled in such a way that I know things will end badly.

And Gareth not ending up with Gina can only be considered a bad choice.

Getting with Lynn, the woman that abandoned you for 9 months can only lead to misery down the road. I expect that Lynn is the kind of person that 5-10-15 years down the road will have a mid-life crisis and leave him again in order to find herself or some such rot.

More importantly, it doesn't feel like the same character, compounding the mistake, I could only stand reading a little of the other story, but the Gina in that felt like a very different person than Gareth's Gina.

In a Heart divided Gina has a sense of whimsy, the ninja references and her subtly planning was pretty amusing, along with a lot of other subtle things, I don't recognize that Gina in the other story.

On another note I have no idea why Gina is so against being with Gareth long-term. With her behavior she is almost throwing him at Lynn, instead of fighting for him.

Frankly knowing that Gina is willing to prostitute herself to save on rent, makes me think less of her, it turns her into a character I don't respect, and don't want to read about.

Or like one of them is Gina in name only.

That is why another name should have been used in my opinion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I'm done with this story now

I've lost all interest in this story at this point. A woman who walks out on him for a year just rolls back up and he accepts it. No just no. It has lost all plausibility, it would make more sense if the laws of gravity reversed themselves, water started burning as it left the tap, gravity was reversed and time started flowing backwards. It's so ridiculous and I'm extremely disappointed. When lynn turns up in the house then Gareth should have said "which one of us is leaving?" Because to be fair she has almost as much right to be there as he does legally at least. The trouble is nothing,and I do mean nothing could make me accept based on the behaviour of Gareth or of any human being I have ever met he could stand to be under the same roof as her, even the insecure Gareth of old. It just doesn't sit right and feels more than flawed- just deeply deeply wrong. Based on her coldness, and ability to flip moods at the cock of a hat, her lack of communication and inability to share the finer emotions how could he ever believe anything she had to say. People can change, but in general only very slowly and not their core traits, even if lynn could change, who is to say their won't be a relapse. Gareth is a good guy, and both smart and in touch with his emotions too. Seeing her return, he should have been calm, assertive and truthful, laid out that they had issues to tie up, but those issues were practical ones not emotional since now he was in love with someone else and maybe that would work out or not. But the place she had once occupied in his heart was now taken by another. It's hard to express how deeply disappointed I am that a writer whom I had been pleased to consistently give 5 stars to has let us all down. How you can create a world, paint a picture with vivid characters that I care about, and is not flawed with spelling or grammatical errors, where the dialogue is natural and nuanced, and the narrative is compelling, but where at the highest most difficult hurdle, fall.

FiveWolvesFiveWolvesover 8 years ago
How do we report this &^%wipe?

Some jerkoff is going around leaving horrible comments on stories anonymously. Is there someway to alert Lit and get the jerk banned?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Weakest plot of all your series. "I don't know" interprets as your lack imagination.

Interesting that you wrote this to explain Gareth, but the person who comes off as the most intriguing, so far, is Lyn. Why did she leave? You never really let her explain: "Lynn went on about her life during the past 9 months. She had an apartment in the city, met with her girlfriends, worked a lot, saw a therapist about some stuff from her past...I tried to pay attention and listen to everything, but my eyes kept getting drawn to her breasts jiggling freely in her t-shirt, and I was remembering the feel of their weight in my hands." And like Gareth, the reader begins to stop caring why Lyn left, since its obvious you either wish to delay telling us, which is a cheap plot device, or you can't come up with a plausible reason. So Lyn's explanation in this chapter just drifts away into Gareth's meanderings and tit lust. Just so much weaker than you other writing. And the stupidity and thoughtlessness of your characters becomes the overarching character trait: they do what they do because they are thoughtless and shallow and self-destructive.

This attempt to explain Gareth, and Lyn, is weak up to this point, and worse, getting boring.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
sorry,, ace is best i can do since there is nothing less to give this trash

The snot Lynn gets A burr up her ass and walks away for 9 months .. no fucking word from it in 9 fucking months,, she never called over xmas or new years,, A real fucking treat to call some fucking monster like this a wife

Personally the day she walked out the fucking door I would have been in the lawyers office telling him to draw up papers instead of letting the fucking loser fuck around for 9 months finding herself

This fucking reject Garreth whines and snivels for 9 months about his estranged wifey being gone for 9 months,,he has A young lady that obviously loves and cherishes him and he is too fucking stupid to see it

The fucking loser bitch walks back in the house like she had just run down to the corner store for A quart of milk and reject takes it back,, ohhhh yeah he shows her he is THE man,, he moves to the spare room instead of telling her to use the spare room

Be fuck if I would have moved for her

anything the cow cunt had moved back in I would have turfed back out the fucking door along with her

Wont bother reading the next chapter of trash

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Great chapter! Somewhere in chapter 1, I read that Lynn works/ worked for Hope's Advocate, Gina works for Hope's Advocate. So does that mean that Lynn knew about Gina, or did Gareth help her out for a job?

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