All Comments on 'A Hero Undone'

The title says it all. I really hope you get around to a part 2!

Just make sure you proof read it; there were a couple of grammar mistakes that took something away from the beauty of the scene you created.

I really hope you write more and continue this story... I love the idea of Super Villainesses - there should be more stories involving them

Always nice to see a story featuring a sexy villainess! This is a great start and I hope you continue the story. I think there's plenty of dramatic and erotic potential for this :)

Have fun and happy writing!

Exceptionally good writing. Hope to see more of this and more stories from you in general. A good story is always a gem to find, doubly so for the more interesting themes like superheroes.

A fun read.

Liked the villainess.

Keep it up.

An interesting start. You've got a good story with good immediate gratification as well as great potential for a much more in depth plot. I look forward to reading more of you works.

Please write more!